Your style is really good, and the sharp line work gives the subject unique character. That said their are a few things that can make this piece better.
Contrast is your biggest enemy here. Just about every part of the piece has same value. I'd like to see more bright lighting on the subject. Play around with color too. The orange on the subject and orangish tan of his pants are compliments to the blue and will help big more focus to the subject if the contrast is played around with more.
Also I'd like to the subject a little larger or more design in the background to give it a little better composition. As is it now there is a lot of negative space left inactive.
Contrast is your biggest enemy here. Just about every part of the piece has same value. I'd like to see more bright lighting on the subject. Play around with color too. The orange on the subject and orangish tan of his pants are compliments to the blue and will help big more focus to the subject if the contrast is played around with more.
Also I'd like to the subject a little larger or more design in the background to give it a little better composition. As is it now there is a lot of negative space left inactive.
It's a good piece. Keep up the good work.
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